This little gem was actually my competition once, but that didn't mean I loved it any less. From the moment, I read it, I was sold. It's well written, keeps your attention throughout the whole thing and holy hell, if it isn't the hottest thing ever without getting naked.
In 'All Aboard' from TKegl, Bella is a student who takes the train daily. After a first, embarrassing conversation with her fellow student Edward, she decides not to try again. But that doesn't keep her from watching him.
She's attracted to him, there is no way around that and with her dark glasses and magazine at hand, she watches him very closely during those train rides.
Still, she fails to notice that behind those big sunglasses, he's watching her to. That's something he confesses on the day he finally asks her out. She, regrettably, has to work, but he joins her and stays at the Starbucks until the very end of her shift.
When they ride the train home together, she accidentally flies backwards and into something very large and hard. UNF. That's where the tasty part starts and hot damn, if it isn't drool-worthy!
This story was written for the 'Fun with Your Clothes on' contest, and fun they did have!
You really have to read this amazing little one-shot. It'll leave you wanting more for sure.
Do it, now!
See you next time and remember to "Keep it Dirty'.
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